Thursday, October 16, 2008

WHAT DO YOU FEEL AS WEATHER CHANGES ?

Do you usually feel depression whenever the sky looks cloudy in the rainy day or excited in the sunny day or lonely in the snowy season? The fact that is people are easy effected by weather. In according to researchers said , people’s mood is also change whenever the weather changes. The goal of this essay is to analyze people’s feeling effected by weather

2 comments:

Nokwan said...

Hi Heidi

Your introduction is good, but I think if you need to refer from research you should give more detail of a researcher.On the other hand, I think you can skip in according to ....

You did a good job.

Nookwan

Anonymous said...

hi....hiede
good job for your introduction~~~
i'm gonna ask that each people have to write down one essay~~~~i called u this morning, but u did.not pick up youe phone...pleas let me know...
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